Nicholas at the start of the play

Well, I'm back at school, a new term and I'm not looking forward to it at all especially with the amount of exams I have and lets not forget Bennet. It's not like he does anything to me but he is just a bully and I got a feeling that he's going to be worse than he normally is especially with the new kids starting I'm glad I'm not them, anyway there was this new girl called lily who had just  started this term and straight away I was attracted to her I really hope that she likes me. But I have to be focused this term what not with all the exams coming up. I don't even know where I'm going to go with life but I really want to make sure I do well because I still want to have a lot of options with what ever I'm going to end up doing.  

Nicholas in the middle of the play

I'm so happy now that I'm with Lily I really like her, but I think she's a bit mad with me because I told her we should keep our relationship a secret, well at least for now but I don't think she gets that I'm doing it because I want to protect her I mean look at the sorts of people at school and plus we just started seeing each other what if it doesn't go right, and now that I found out that William likes her I don't want him to get hurt because its sounds like he has opened his self up to her even though it was a massive lie about his parents dying but still it must count for something. And I was right about Bennet he's being a massive prick and Chadwick is getting it the worst, its so annoying that no one is standing up to him and I know I haven't but I'm not the one he is bullying and I have more to lose but if I was Chadwick I would not stand for it. At the end of the day Bennet is just a little man with big words.

Nicholas towards the end of the play

I woke up at 6.00 am with a really bad headache which isn't good because I have my history exam today which I have been revising for a long time so I hope I get a good mark. And I have to say I never saw eye to eye with my history teacher because he doesn't  really like me, but I never did anything bad he's just got something against me he is such a dick head. This has been such a bad week for me especially when the secret about me and lily came out I didn't want anyone to get hurt, William is pissed of with me but its not my fault I like lily too and plus its not like William was going to get her.

I got at school at 7:30 because I wanted to do some extra revision for the test it didn't help that Bennet was there annoying me but he went away as soon as he saw Chadwick I wish he would just get of everyone's backs I mean its getting old now, anyway I wasn't just going in early to revise I wanted to see lily before school starts.

I'm also starting to worry about William he has been acting weirder than usual lately but its probably just a phase he is going threw, I just think he should just grow up I mean its not like he's going to die or anything. Anyway me and lily are getting closer and i dont want the stupid prick William messing it up for me.

The Nine Questions

Who am I?

My name is Nicholas Chatman and I am 17 years old and I am tall with medium blonde hair I am also really clever and sporty with big ambitions. I have a secret relationship with Lily. I wear trainers with scruffy trousers and a nice blazer.


Where am I?

In my scene I am waiting in the school hallway with Lily and William. I have a history exam after the break so meanwhile me and Lily are talking to William.

What time is it?

Its mid October in 2009 and its early afternoon.


What surrounds me?

What I'm going to do in life because I have self-pressured my self in doing well in but I don't actually know what I'm going to do so I'm just trying to do well in my exams so I have a lot of options.



Whats my relationship with people and things?

I had a secret relationship with Lily but then William found out and I do feel sorry for him because he likes lily and she likes me but its not like its my fault.


What are my circumstances?

I'm going out with Lily but William fancy's her, and I want to do well in my exams.



What do I want?

I want to find out what I'm going to do when I leave this place and what I am going want to do In life, Whether I stay with Lily and stay here in stockport which I don't think is going to happen, I also want to know who I am, I want to have big ambitions in life but I don't want to do something that I don't want to do, but that's the problem I don't know what I want.


What's my obstacle?

My obstacle is my GCSEs and what I want to do in life.


What do I do to get what I want?

To be honest I just have to be nice to people even if I don't like them just as long I get what I want.

Brin and Finns Tings

1.       I like how you get to the point in your blog. I know what you did and how you did it.

2.       Nothing confusing really. Just make sure the posts are separate because sometimes when there in one chunk you don’t get the feel for all of them.

3.       I want to know how you felt in all of your exercises. Tell me what if felt like walking around. Was it difficult? Was it boring?

4.       No misspellings

5.       No he needs to add pictures and videos to add more interest also go in to detail on everything I want to picture in my head what you did.