1.
I like how you get to the point in your blog. I
know what you did and how you did it.
2.
Nothing confusing really. Just make sure the
posts are separate because sometimes when there in one chunk you don’t get the
feel for all of them.
3.
I want to know how you felt in all of your
exercises. Tell me what if felt like walking around. Was it difficult? Was it
boring?
4.
No misspellings
5.
No he needs to add pictures and videos to add
more interest also go in to detail on everything I want to picture in my head
what you did.
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